Halle's Revisions

I would like to redo my multi-exposure candle and marble picture, slide 6. I like the concept but I feel like if I spent more time on multi-exposing it, the lighting and focus would turn out better. Also, I want to redo my long exposure of my house, slide 10. The lighting is really bright so if I redid it, it would turn out better. I would either change the aperture or turn the lights down in my house, so the house lights would look better in the long exposure. My last one I would like to change is slide 8 because my focus is kind of blurry, but I did that on purpose. I want to make the whole hand in the picture, instead of the top being cropped off.